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Program Evaluation Paper
Spiritual Inner Strength Through Self Awareness Retreat
Sarah Reynolds, Shimera Thomas, Jaymel Gilmore
Ball State University
EDAC 634
Group
Members
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Roles
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Commented
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Sarah
Reynolds
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Group Leader. Provided program evaluation from personal source.
Formatted and edited evaluation #2 and responded with comments. Contributed
to introduction, group response, group reflection, and table. Reviewed
overall document for edits.
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Group 2 |
Shimera
Thomas
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Provided program evaluation from personal source. Formatted and
edited evaluation #3 and responded with comments. Contributed to
introduction, group response, group reflection, and table.
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Group 4 |
Jaymel
Gilmore
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Set up video conferences for the group meetings. Posted the
program evaluation to the blog for the group & created google document.
Provided program evaluation from personal source. Formatted and edited
evaluation #1 and responded with comments. Wrote the process. Contributed to
introduction, group response, group reflection, and table.
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Group 4 |
Introduction
The Spiritual Inner Strength Through Self Awareness Retreat is
intended to bring together adults that are on their spiritual journey or
looking to start their journey. Our retreat is targeted to parents. The
intention of the retreat is to provide knowledge around spiritual learning;
introduce the practices of yoga and meditation; and holistic living.
Program Evaluation #1
As conducted by Jane Gilmore (of no relation to Jaymel Gilmore),
Paths to QUALITY Coaching Specialist. Jane holds a B.S. in Child and Family
Development and a M.S. Elementary Education. In her current position, Jane
supports coaches who are working in early childhood programs to support ECE
professionals in providing and maintaining quality learning environments for
the families and the children in their communities. She has planned evening
trainings for adults and planned day long education opportunities to include
families and community members.
- What do you
like most about our program design? I would really
enjoy implementing a program like this as a part of an everyday schedule
in working with children. This is a program that can benefit the adults
and children while doing it together. I believe implementing a program
like this with children from a young age can lead to them developing coping
skills as they grow. Being in early childhood programs and the elementary
classroom children having direction and opportunity to build coping skills
is important, they have confidence to know they can handle a variety of
experiences that come along. Children and adults need to be aware of many
different ways to handle stress and emotions. This type of program can
provide a very powerful self-soothing and comforting way to gain
self-control.
- What do you
think should be improved? Why? And how? I can’t think
of any improvements for this program. I believe it is a great program for
adults and children to do together to build a relationship based on mutual
comfort and maintain self-control and recognizing all the states of mind,
body, and rest.
Program Evaluation #2
As conducted by Ashleigh Coster, Program Director with the
Intercollegiate YMCA. She has been a part of the YMCA of Greater Indianapolis
association since 2006. She was born and raised in South Carolina and is
a graduate of Clemson University with a degree in Parks, Recreation, and
Tourism Management. Ashleigh followed her passion to work with youth and
has served in a variety of roles within the YMCA, including organizing youth
sports leagues to supervising summer day camp programs. In her current
role, she supervises a variety of programs designed to engage college students
in service opportunities in the community such as free after school programs in
low income neighborhoods across Indianapolis as well as planning and leading
service trips for students during the year. The Intercollegiate YMCA also has
an active board which she helps meetings and facilitate retreats for.
- What do you
like most about the program design? I do love the
idea of this program, and I think it sounds like you all have thought
through the setup and the different aspects that would need to go into it.
I like how each section/workshop goes into detail and examples of
how these workshops would be taught along with adding the practical
knowledge so we can see what some of the workshop might look like.
- What do you
think should be improved? Why? And how? A couple of
things that might be missing or might be helpful for someone reading this
program design for the first time…
- I feel like there
needs to be more set up in the beginning before the program is described.
Is this a three-day retreat? Off site or in your work space?
Who is this intended for and will it be a mixed group of people?
The paper says it is a retreat, but then I didn’t see anywhere in
the paper what that actually entails. It just goes straight to
workshop one and describing that.
- If
it is truly a retreat, where you are bringing different people together
from a variety of backgrounds, I think there should also be some verbiage
about how this retreat is for individual growth but also how is it going
to be set up for the group as a whole. Will there be reflection
times? Are the workshops for the entire group? If so, will
there be separate times set up for everyone to practice these techniques
that they are learning?
Again, if it is retreat then describing three workshops may not be
suffice. I would almost set up for the whole retreat so we can see a
rough outline of how these days will be spent. It would be nice to see
how each workshop is going to flow throughout the day or how you all plan to
tie each workshop together with one another.
Program Evaluation #3
Olessor Anthony obtained an Evangelist license in 2012 under the
leadership of her pastor Sandra Yancy. Her work includes many trainings and
workshops to include Teacher’s Training, Prophetic Training, Evangelism
Training, and Leadership Training. She is continually enhancing her spiritual
growth through attending professional development trainings. Serving God and
missionary work is Olessor's passion. She is employed by the Chicago Public
Schools Head Start Program as a Comprehensive Coordinator for more than 18
years. Olessor earned her B.A. in Family Studies at DePaul University in 2016.
Olessor is a loving parent of three children and extended mother to her
deceased sister’s four daughters.
- What do you
like most about our program design? The paper is
astounding and I am very impressed. The second paragraph of the
introduction is a great statement of freedom with a person having a
Religion and being Spiritual; one is of restraints and the other is more
open minded. What I like most about the program is the overall scope of
how to assist others with becoming in tune with self. My comment is this
program design will be of great help as a wellness tool. This
retreat will assist with self-awareness that will bring a person to know
more about themselves in a Holistic aspect. The program will also be
beneficial and life changing. The different techniques that has been
shared are great options for one’s health, inner peace, and daily
activities. The design of the program can be an everyday tool for
educational purposes (school), office (workplaces), churches, family
gatherings, etc. This program is a way to connect the body, mind, soul,
and spirit. The inner man must come alive and align with everything
else. Shakespeare said it best, "To thy own self, be true…”
2.
What do you think should
be improved? Why? And how?
- Open the program up
to others and do on site presentations.
- Sharing this with
our youth can counteract some of their challenges (cognitive
awareness/anxiety frustration).
Group Members’ responses
Do you agree
with the evaluations or not? Why or why not?
I agree with the evaluation of Jane Gilmore. As our research
determined, yoga and meditation are practices that can benefit any age group.
Jane pointed out in her evaluation that she feels this is a program that adults
and children could benefit while doing it together. Additionally, teaching
children to the practices of holistic living in leading by example allows the
adult learner and child to appreciate nature and becoming one with the
universe. ~ Jaymel G.
I agree with the evaluation of Ashleigh Coster. She mentioned
putting more details about the retreat into the program design. This would
allow us to give the day more structure and be more attractive to certain
audiences. I also think reflection time is a great idea, since this is about
the individual and self-awareness. ~ Sarah R.
I agree with the evaluation from Olessor Anthony, to a certain
degree. Yes, I think that the actual retreat is great idea and tool when
introducing the holistic living to selective individuals. The program can be
utilized for all ages considering how it is taught. ~ Shimera T.
How would you
improve your program design?
One idea gained from Jane’s evaluation was
a specified target group of adults who work with children. Because of that
overall theme in her evaluation, I believe that we should narrow the target
group to parents. Though Spiritual Learning using yoga, meditation, and
holistic living are practices that can be adapted to any age group, the parent
is the child’s first teacher. Instilling these practices in children will plant
the seed as they come into adulthood and are open to the idea of mindfulness,
self-control and connectivity with the universe. ~ Jaymel G.
As Ashleigh suggested, we could be more specific in the logistics
of the retreat and put more details with it so we can give a better picture of
where it is, what we are accomplishing, and who could attend. I would add the
details to the program design, possibly in the introduction, to help establish
a better idea or vision of the retreat. I would want to talk to my group mates
to make sure we are all on the same page on where we want to host the retreat
and what we want other individuals to get out of it. ~ Sarah R.
By adding an agenda, specified by class and category, the retreat
would be well received. For media, advertising, and public support, I would
provide future and current clients with an overview video and brochure about
our program describing in detail yet providing the highlights and benefits only
to make our program design desirable. The alternative style of living, will
introduce a basic foundation and orientation on holistic living and what it
entails utilizing the mind, body, soul, and spirit through retreat activities.
When customers arrive an itinerary/agenda would be provided for guests
that are enrolled into the retreat. ~ Shimera T.
As a group, we discussed our evaluations
and the following changes will be implemented in the final demonstration:
- Narrow the target
audience to parents.
- Provide an agenda to
include location and workshop details.
- Include time for
participants to reflect and provide feedback on the retreat.
- Provide resources
and handouts for participants in the form of a brochure.
Group reflection
The
main highlights of our assignment were the positive feedback from evaluators
and great ideas to provide a better retreat and discussing the program idea
with professionals who have had experience in planning adult learning events.
We worked as a team to overcome obstacles to complete the assignment. We
believe the uniqueness of the program is that individuals can benefit no matter
where they are in their spiritual journey. It is versatile in that it can be
adapted to meet adult learners from all backgrounds. Even though we targeted
parents any age can join; including participating as a family. The most
significant part of the assignment is getting feedback and building the
foundation so that the final project provides a comprehensive approach to
spiritual learning.
Process
In the selection of evaluators, each group
member reached out to a professional who works with adult learners. Each
evaluator was given a copy of the program design and asked the two questions
listed in our assignment instructions. As a group, we shared our responses to
the evaluations and decided what changes or adjustments were needed to our
program design to be reflected in the final demonstration. We continued to meet
via video conference twice a week to ensure that we were in sync and in
agreeance with the final program evaluation before submission. The great thing
about our group is that at the beginning of this process, we established
meeting dates and times, which made it easy to stay on track.
Table 4. Summary of Program Evaluation
Evaluators
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Ideas for Improving Program Design
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Revisions/Your responses
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1
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Jane Gilmore, B.S, M.S., Paths to QUALITY Coaching Specialist
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Believes it will be a great program for adults who work with
children.
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Narrow target audience to parents who are the first educators of
children.
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2
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Ashleigh Coster
Program Director YMCA
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Is this a three-day retreat? Off site or in your work
space? Who is this intended for and will it be a mixed group of people?
Needs more details
Will there be reflection times? Are the workshops for the
entire group? If so, will there be separate times set up for everyone
to practice these techniques that they are learning?
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Put more details into the program design about logistics and
flow of the day. Add reflection times to the day and/or workshops
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3
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Olessor Anthony
Evangelist
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Open the program up to youth. Provide onsite presentations.
She mentioned in her own words via telephone that she enjoyed the
blueprint and lay out of the retreat. Evangelist was pleased with the design
and plans to implement a retreat in her ministry.
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Create and add an agenda and brochures for participants.
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What a compliment to have an evaluator say that she can't think of any improvements-wow! I am impressed that you have three professional evaluations. We asked 5 people and only had 2 responses. I thought the suggestion of opening up the programs to others was something interesting to consider but wonder how you would manage that. Would it require more resources to market the program and track attendees? I agree with the evaluator's suggestions to be more specific as to the details. That said, I imagine you are similar to our group in that we didn't go into all of that detail in the program design and were waiting to share more in the final demonstration.
ReplyDeleteWow, what excellent credible evaluators you had! Excellent job choosing the evaluators. I found the feedback about an agenda to be very helpful. I know that is the first thing I look at whenever I am attending a conference or retreat. I didn't even think about it when reading your program design. Great work! -Sam
ReplyDeleteOne thing that came up a lot in our evaluations four our group was the little details which can make or break a program-yet we had not thought about at all! For example, the finances, literal location, legality (such as waivers for yoga because someone could get injured), insurance, etc. It never occurred to me that a program may need insurance. But if this is a retreat with physical activities such as yoga, deep conversations, etc, insurance, waivers, confidentiality agreements maybe needed.
ReplyDeleteThis has been an excellent, excellent, excellent project. I am impressed you got three professionals! My group only secured two! Your group tackled some difficult and intimidating concepts and made them appealing and nonthreatening.
I have loved watching this project develop. No one would know you had lost group members!
I appreciated the thoroughness of the evaluators on your program. They seemed to really understand the program and were able to articulate how they felt about it well. I like the recommendation about opening the program up to youth. I think it would be so powerful for them! I also like the suggestion about adding time throughout the retreat for reflection. Reflection is such a powerful tool in recalling what you have learned and how you plan to apply it. Overall, I enjoyed this project and reading about the program, and now, the evaluations!
ReplyDelete-Alissa Howe
You had some great evaluation information. I thought the idea by Jane Gilmore was a good idea. She stated to hold the program to be done with parents and students. I think this type of bonding between the family would grow stronger bonds and help in learning process. I look forward to the final release of the project.
ReplyDeleteHello Group,1,
ReplyDeleteIt was enjoyable to read about your evaluation and feedback from the evaluators. It appears that in response your group worked together to find positive resolutions based on the feedback from your evaluators. It has been enjoyable watching the process of your evaluations.
All the best!
Jen
Sarah, Shimera, andJaymel,
ReplyDeleteYour evaluators provided you some good suggestions about how to improve your program.
I really like the second educator’s evaluation! She raised very good questions. I like the third educator’s comments about why she liked your program.
As a group, we discussed our evaluations and the following changes will be implemented in the final demonstration:
• Narrow the target audience to parents.
• Provide an agenda to include location and workshop details.
• Include time for participants to reflect and provide feedback on the retreat.
• Provide resources and handouts for participants in the form of a brochure.
-- Good!
Suggestions:
1. Tell us specifically how you will improve your program design based on your evaluators’ suggestions. For example:
I would add the details to the program design, possibly in the introduction, to help establish a better idea or vision of the retreat.
-- How?
2. Check your APA format and your grammar. For example:
Program Evaluation #1
-- You don’t need underline.
The intention of the retreat is to provide knowledge around spiritual learning; introduce the practices of yoga and meditation; and holistic living.
--- delete ; before and holistic living.
As conducted by Jane Gilmore (of no relation to Jaymel Gilmore), Paths to QUALITY Coaching Specialist.
-- This is not a sentence.
As conducted by Ashleigh Coster, Program Director with the Intercollegiate YMCA.
-- This is not a sentence.
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